Sunday, May 31, 2009

Othaniel's alliteration writing

This is Othaniel's alliteration writing using the first letter of his name.

Olivia the Octopus ate oranges and oysters in the oven.
Olivia lived with the octopus in Otahuhu and put oranges and oysters in the oven.


Mrs Tuala said...

Hi Othaniel,
Wow, what a humorous piece of writing, it really made me laugh. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more of your writing.

Mrs Tuala

Mr. Austin said...

This is very good! Nice job on your writing. It made me laugh!

Mr. Austin

Miss Walley said...


That was a very clever poem and O is a difficult letter to use alliteration with. Well Done!

Miss Walley - Tamaki Intermediate

Miss Garden said...

Oranges and Oysters! What strange taste Olivia has.
Great alliteration Othaniel.
Miss Garden

Room 3 said...

Hi Othaniel,

We liked your poem and your pictures. You spoke clearly. We did some tongue twister poems last week.

Room 3