tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6368855663438109885.post2620489175615593880..comments2023-04-28T01:39:26.425+12:00Comments on Room 8: Othaniel's alliteration writingPt England Blogs Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03180808682393548165noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6368855663438109885.post-88091886170851600802009-06-03T14:57:40.185+12:002009-06-03T14:57:40.185+12:00Hi Othaniel,
We liked your poem and your pictures...Hi Othaniel,<br /><br />We liked your poem and your pictures. You spoke clearly. We did some tongue twister poems last week.<br /><br />From,<br />Room 3Room 3http://creativevoicepbs.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6368855663438109885.post-13562898668719055402009-06-03T07:02:13.642+12:002009-06-03T07:02:13.642+12:00Oranges and Oysters! What strange taste Olivia has...Oranges and Oysters! What strange taste Olivia has.<br />Great alliteration Othaniel.<br />Miss GardenMiss Gardenhttp://pesroom12and13.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6368855663438109885.post-53845987069889882802009-06-02T17:58:29.328+12:002009-06-02T17:58:29.328+12:00Hi
That was a very clever poem and O is a difficu...Hi<br /><br />That was a very clever poem and O is a difficult letter to use alliteration with. Well Done!<br /><br />Miss Walley - Tamaki IntermediateMiss Walleyhttp://www.tamakitales.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6368855663438109885.post-21151761512339637742009-06-02T15:48:40.331+12:002009-06-02T15:48:40.331+12:00This is very good! Nice job on your writing. It ma...This is very good! Nice job on your writing. It made me laugh!<br /><br />Mr. Austin<br />www.mraustinsblog.comMr. Austinhttp://www.mraustinsblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6368855663438109885.post-10295309053891013082009-06-01T23:35:21.897+12:002009-06-01T23:35:21.897+12:00Hi Othaniel,
Wow, what a humorous piece of writing...Hi Othaniel,<br />Wow, what a humorous piece of writing, it really made me laugh. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more of your writing.<br /><br />Mrs TualaMrs Tualahttp://pestuala.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com