Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Jouan goes up the hill like Jack and Jill

This is what Jouan has written for alliteration. She also drew a picture using kidpix to go with her writing.

Jouan went up the hill like Jack and Jill.
Jouan jokes with Jane while doing jump jam.
Jane jokes with Jouan while the jet lands in Japan.

1 comment:

Room 8 Super Stars said...

Hi Jouan, I like the way you have put lots of alliteration in your poem and how it has the same first letter as your name. It must be lots of fun doing poetry, we did it last term at our school and I liked it too. Your pictures are also very cool. From Robbie in Room 10 at Grey Lynn School