Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Zane's Christchurch Earthquake Writing


Here is a paragraph that Zane has written about the earthquake that happened recently in Christchurch, New Zealand. He has been learning to use interesting words to write sentences.

In Christchurch there has been a massive earthquake. All the power has been cut off. In the busy city center of Christchurch, buildings have collapsed.

3 comments:

Kaycee said...

Hi Zane
I really enjoyed reading your message for Christchurch .Maybe next time you could add something about how you felt.Anyway great story.

Anonymous said...

Hi Zane
We are students studying to be primary teachers in Christchurch at the moment. Your description of the earthquake was very good. Well done :)

Anonymous said...

Hi Zane
We are students studying to be primary teachers in Christchurch at the moment. Your description of the earthquake was very good. Well done :)