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That was a great story about camp. Lots of the campers enjoyed camp cooking, but sometimes the smoke got into their eyes so they had to find a better spot to sit on. Only a couple more years to go before you can go to camp too!
I bet you are looking forward to camping on the school field one day too Uili. Did you check to see if Mauina had a tidy tent? Keep up the great writing Uili I loved the way you varied you sentence beginnings.
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Hi Uili
That was a great story about camp. Lots of the campers enjoyed camp cooking, but sometimes the smoke got into their eyes so they had to find a better spot to sit on. Only a couple more years to go before you can go to camp too!
Mrs Lagitupu
I bet you are looking forward to camping on the school field one day too Uili.
Did you check to see if Mauina had a tidy tent?
Keep up the great writing Uili I loved the way you varied you sentence beginnings.
Mrs Nua
Hey Uili
That was cool that you saw the senior school camping. did the smoke smell like dead fish? Well have a happy and safe day.
Bye
Dear Uili,
Thank you for telling about the camp. A fire that smells like dead fish? Oh no!
I can tell that your class is writing with transition words like, finally. Transition words really help. You are becoming great writers!
Keep it up!
:-)
Mrs. Yollis
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