Thursday, April 2, 2009

Uili and his Camp Adventure

Have a listen to Uili's writing about camp and find out what he could see.


Mrs Lagitupu said...

Hi Uili

That was a great story about camp. Lots of the campers enjoyed camp cooking, but sometimes the smoke got into their eyes so they had to find a better spot to sit on. Only a couple more years to go before you can go to camp too!

Mrs Lagitupu

Nga Kaituhi o PES said...

I bet you are looking forward to camping on the school field one day too Uili.
Did you check to see if Mauina had a tidy tent?
Keep up the great writing Uili I loved the way you varied you sentence beginnings.

Mrs Nua

henry said...

Hey Uili

That was cool that you saw the senior school camping. did the smoke smell like dead fish? Well have a happy and safe day.

Mrs. Yollis said...

Dear Uili,

Thank you for telling about the camp. A fire that smells like dead fish? Oh no!

I can tell that your class is writing with transition words like, finally. Transition words really help. You are becoming great writers!

Keep it up!

Mrs. Yollis