Sunday, April 5, 2009

Asena goes to Senior Camp


A few weeks ago our Seniors had camp. Listen to Asena's writing as she explains what she saw.

2 comments:

Nga Kaituhi o PES said...

I am glad you had the chance to stroll around our camp Asena.Are you looking forward to sleeping in a tent when you are in the Senior School.

Kepp up the cool writing Asena.

Mrs Nua

Linda Yollis said...

Dear Asena,

Thank you for sharing your writing! I noticed you used transition words like: first, then, and next. That really helps people follow the sequence of the story!

Nice work!
Mrs. Yollis