Friday, March 13, 2009

Othaniel enjoys his time at the Picnic

This is Othaniel's story about going to the Picnic at the reserve. Can you see him in the photo? He's second from the left.


Little Voices, Little Scholars. said...

Hi Othaniel!
It is so good listening to your story. You wrote very well and have tried using many interesting words in your story.
Good job and do keep it up.

Mrs She

Room 8, Hamilton said...

I couldn't watch your video for ages because unfortunately it was blocked at school, but nevermind, I finally got to see it. I liked the way that you spoke, the camera was up close but you didn't seem nervous, you seemed happy and spoke clearly and proudly. It also helped that you didn't rush your words and talk too fast, you spoke very well. Iw ill show this to my class tomorrow on the big screen projector because we have to do recounts about our day camp on Friday. I can say to my students "See... you can do it just like Othaniel!"
Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand.

Anonymous said...

Great story othaniel.From Kaycee