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Room 10 and their scrumptious Noodles on VoiceThread
We've been working hard in our writing. One of our experiences was eating Noodles. We had to write what we could see, smell and taste. Here's some of our gems that the children have written.
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Anonymous
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Hi Room 10,
Your noodles look good to eat. What flavour did you use on your noodles? Well done for using some great describing words. Keep up the great Voice Threading.
Room 10! I do like noodles but after listening to the voicethread and hearing someone say they looked slimy and like eels I was thinking "nah I don't want to eat any now!". I also like the person who spoke at the end who said that she liked noodles and wanted to eat them! But eels.... YUCK! Mr Webb, Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.
3 comments:
Hi Room 10,
Your noodles look good to eat. What flavour did you use on your noodles? Well done for using some great describing words. Keep up the great Voice Threading.
From Miss Paton and Room 3
Room 10! I do like noodles but after listening to the voicethread and hearing someone say they looked slimy and like eels I was thinking "nah I don't want to eat any now!". I also like the person who spoke at the end who said that she liked noodles and wanted to eat them! But eels.... YUCK!
Mr Webb, Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.
Hi room 10 the noodles sounded really yuck and disgusting. that was asuperb stoy cant wai for another story.
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