Sunday, February 22, 2009

Watermelon by Jouan


Listen to Jouan as she shares about her eating a piece of watermelon. We will be doing lots of recounts and recreative writing this term.

7 comments:

NZWaikato said...

Jouan
I liked the way that you spoke about watermelon. It does smell a bit like perfume, and I dont like eating the seeds in it! I will show this to my classroom tomorrow well done with your video.
Mr Webb and Room Eight, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.

Anonymous said...

I think you sholde do some more but i like it keep up the good work from wyatt

Anonymous said...

Wow Jouan,watermelon pefume.Really intretsing and tomatos that look like watermelon!Your story was really awesome.

Anonymous said...

So amazing i love that storie.What a storie good luck for next years blogging

Pt England Scribes said...

That was very good because you said what the seeds that were in the watermelon. From Esrah.

Room 10 @ Pt England School said...

Hi mubasshira Thank you for leaving a comment. I really liked the message that you gave me. Thank you so much Jouan.

Mubasshira said...

Hey Jouan

WOW!!!

what a great story I really liked it.
What was your favourite bit of eating this watermelon?

Thanks
From Mubasshira