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Hi Gloria,I liked your story and how you described the seeds and how it looks like.keep it up with the stories. From Rita and Turuhira.
Hi GloriaI really liked your story about your watermelon like how you said there were seeds in the watermelon and it was triangle.From Your Cousin MinoPS Malo Pesi
What a great video Gloria! I love watermelon but I bet it tastes better where you are. It is really interesting to see what other children do in school.I am a teacher in Manchester, UK and we put our work on our blog too. Why not come and have a look?Keep up the good work.Jack SloanChorlton Park Primary SchoolManchester UK
mmmm Gloria now that story was mouthwatering and. I liked the part when u said the watermelon was triangel keep the work up .froom Brooklyn
Hi gloria I think that was a good story out thery from wyatt
Hi Gloria,that was a very cool story. I think you should make another blog.From Tyla
Gloria,your a really good watermelon writer!I love your story!From Jonita
wow Gloria that was a realy good story about watermelon telling us all about having watermelon. From Kaycee.
Wow Gloria I really like your story. I loved how you described the seeds. Best of luck on your next blog.
Gloria I liked how you described the seeds in the watermalon and how it looked like a trianglefrom shayne
Hello Jack thank you for sending a comment to me I really appreciate from Gloria.
Wow! That was a cool and interesting story you wrote. That was a good description. I really love the way you discribed it.From Tyla
Hi GloriaKeep up the good work and work hard.From Mum
I like the way Gloria expressed her experience with watermelons. She was able to draw comparisons about the way she experienced the taste of water melons. Good on you, Ms Lavakula for bringing out the best in Gloria. Keep the good work going!!!
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