Friday, March 16, 2012

Mubashishir's Sotball Paragrapphs

Here is Mubashshir's writing about our game of softball that we played on Thursday 15th March, 2012. Well done Mubashishir!

Yesterday after lunch, Room 9 played a game of softball. We played outside our classroom on the school field. Our class was divided into two teams. It was Patriots and Breakers against Taipans and Giants.

I held the bat tight and whacked the ball high and it rolled on the ground. Then I ran hard to first base. I had to touch the base. My mates yelled.

I felt nervous, I had to win. I felt happy too when my group tried hard. Maybe next time we will win our game of softball.


Melville Intermediate, Hamilton said...

What a great report about playing Softball and yes I hope that you win the next time that you play, of course winning is not the most important thing, its the taking part! Although sometimes I know that its really, really hard when you don't win. Nice writing.
Mr Webb and Room 5, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.

Anonymous said...

Good commitment mubashshir and your team.Hope you win next time.keep trying for your the way you described.