Thursday, March 29, 2012

Cameo in the Weekend


Cameo wrote about what she did in the weekend. Listen as she shares with you what she did. Cameo was able to seperate her writing into 3 paragraphs. Listen and see if you tell where in her writing her new paragraphs begin. Well done Cameo!
video

3 comments:

Laura Ellenburg's EDM 310 Class Blog said...

Hi Cameo!

My name is Laura Ellenburg, and I attend the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama, U.S.A. It sounds like you had a very interesting weekend! I just wanted to let you know that I was able to tell where your paragraphs were as you were telling your story. Awesome video!

Sincerely,
Laura Ellenburg

rosalina said...

Hi cameo I like the way you read your story in a loud steady voice I like it because you stay nice brave Love from rosalina

rosalina said...

hi cameo I like the way you used a loud, clear voice love from rosalina.