Thursday, May 12, 2011

Maurice's compound sentences


The Suns writing group have been working hard to improve their writing by including compound sentences. Listen carefully to hear what conjunctions Maurice has used.
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2 comments:

Jorja said...

Hi Maurice
great compound sentences but maybe you could speak louder so that people can hear you but any ways apart from that great job
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Lawson said...

Hello Maurice you did a great job on the compound sentences you did well I could hear you well and had a strong voice maybe you could talk less like a robot for people so you be heard better!