Monday, May 17, 2010

Rave's paragraph about the Monkey Bars


As part of writing, we have been learning to write paragraphs. Do you know what a paragraph is?
Here is Rave paragraph about Monkey Bars.

Outside in the playground, monkey bars are used by children. Sometimes when you swing across on the bars you can get blisters on your hands. Monkey bars look like a ladder, but they're the other way around.

7 comments:

keis said...

Hi Rave
I like it its the best

From Keis

Rave said...

Hi Rave,
I like your movie about monkey bars. I loved the way that you spoke and your voice was very good to listen to.
Keep up the good work.
Much love from Mum, Dad and Suade xxxx

shatna said...

Hi Asena
Your blog was really neat.
Keis's mama is proud of you.

2010Miquela said...

WOW!! It look's like you are learning a lot at school my niece! Tau ke! I really enjoyed listening to your paragraph because it informs me well about the uses of monkey bars and what may happen to you if you play on them. You seem to be getting more and more clever as the years go on! It's great to be able to see your work, and the complexity of writing that you are getting into. keep up the good work honey. lot's of love, aunty Mush! =]

Harry said...

hey Rave,
that was a nice paragaph about monkey bars.

hope you didnt get any blistes on your hands,hahaha......

keep up the great work
love DADDY.xx

Harry said...

hey Rave;
that was a cool paragraph about monkey bars....

I hope you didnt get any blistes on your hands.
keep up your great work
love DADDY...xxx

Harry Motufoua said...

hey Rave;
that was a cool paragraph about monkey bars....

I hope you didnt get any blistes on your hands.
keep up your great work
love DADDY...xxx