Gloria wrote a recount about the acting that went on at our assembly. We've been learning to use different vocab to make our writing more detailed. Listen and see if you can hear what she uses and says to make her writing even better.
To see the movie of what she's talking about click here. It's on one our other school blogs.
8 comments:
Hi Gloria,
that was a great recount about assembly. The vocab you chose made it sound very good. I hope you enjoyed the assembly!
From Briar in Room 10 at Grey Lynn School.
Dear Gloria.
Well done on your recount of our first assembly. I enjoyed listening to your clear voice while you read your work
Love from Mrs Jarman
Well done Gloria
Hi Gloria, I did enjoy hearing your recount about the damsel in distress. It sounds like Mr Burt was pretty funny and I missed a fun assembly. Thank you for fillong me in on what happened.
Mrs Burt
Hi Gloria,
You did a great job recounting this very funny Assembly item - well done!
Mrs Nua
Gloria you did an awesome job at summarizing the events of the assembly. You are a great reader and writer. Keep up the good work!
Jahmarkus Rabb
University of South Alabama
Dr. Strange, Instructor
http://rabbjedm310fall2009.blogspot.com/
Very interesting! You do a great job and reading and writing and I can tell the assembly was fun.
Great job. I can tell that the assembly was fun. You have a clear voice, so keep speaking well.
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