Thursday, September 8, 2011

Stevenson's Goldilocks and the Three Bears

In Room 9 we are learning to speak in detail by adding more information, more explanation and more description in our writing. Listen as Stevenson shares with the most important part of the story Goldilocks and the Three Bears.


Miss Burne said...


what a wonderful recount of Goldilocks and the three bears. I can really see in my mind what is happening in that part of the story because of your detailed description.

Excellent work and thanks for sharing.

ngametuaP said...

Hi Stevenson

I loved your story a lot
I hope you can write some more
writing i would nlook
forward to it.

nice reading you story Sevenson
I loved it very much.

Martha Yim said...


Your writing skills are beautiful! You gave us a lot of information about the story and it was all put together very well. I look forward to showing your blog post to my 5th grade class next week.

If you would like to see their blog the site is:

Thank you for sharing your story.