Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Anamei's conclusion to Jack and the Beanstalk


This is Anamei's writing for Jack and the Beanstalk. Can you hear which sentences are her gems? (a sentence that she has used very interesting words)

2 comments:

Room 10 Grey Lynn said...

Hi Anamei,
We think the gem sentence in your writing is the one that says "Jack hurried towards his freedom," because the word freedom isn't used much when we're writing and it makes us think of someone running away from danger.
From Room 10 at Grey Lynn.

saadiya said...

hi anamai i liked listening to your
story sbout jack and the beanstalk
from saadiya