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Hi Anamei, We think the gem sentence in your writing is the one that says "Jack hurried towards his freedom," because the word freedom isn't used much when we're writing and it makes us think of someone running away from danger. From Room 10 at Grey Lynn.
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Hi Anamei,
We think the gem sentence in your writing is the one that says "Jack hurried towards his freedom," because the word freedom isn't used much when we're writing and it makes us think of someone running away from danger.
From Room 10 at Grey Lynn.
hi anamai i liked listening to your
story sbout jack and the beanstalk
from saadiya
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