Here is Harlem's writing that he has written and edited with help.
Hey do you want to hear about my story? On Guy Fawkes I went to the Waitakere Fireworks show. There were marching bands, dancing, motorbike treks, a rescue helicopter and a wheel boat. It was night time all the lights turned off and the fireworks started. There were glow sticks and the fireworks were loud. After that we went to Action World.
6 comments:
Hey Harlem, it sounds like you had an awesome Guy Fawkes night. I saw the Waitakere Fireworks from my uncle and aunties house. Me and my cousin were sitting on their garage roof with blankets and bean bags. Were the fireworks so loud that they popped.
Anyway keep up the good work and awesome writing.
Hi Harlem
I really liked your story of the Guy Fawkes.Speaking of Guy Fawkes i need to write a story about it too.Just one mistake you didn't spell trick right.You spelled it like this trek.
Anyways Keep Up The Good Work!!!!!
From Jorja
Hi Harlem,
What a wonderful story you have written. I enjoyed reading your story about you night. It sounds like you had a lot of fun and it was awesome.
Anyways, keep up the good work.
Yours Sincerely,
Mubasshira
Hi Harlem,
It sounds like you had an AWESOME time. Who did you go with? I didn't have a chance to go to the Waitakere Fireworks show. I just had a good ole Fireworks show at home with my Family! Hope you keep writing great stories!
Selena.
Hi Harlem,
It sounds like you had an AWESOME time. Who did you go with? I didn't have a chance to go to the Waitakere Fireworks show. I just had a good ole Fireworks show at home with my Family! Hope you keep writing great stories!
Selena.
Hi Harlem,
It sounds like you had an AWESOME time. Who did you go with? I didn't have a chance to go to the Waitakere Fireworks show. I just had a good ole Fireworks show at home with my Family! Hope you keep writing great stories!
Selena.
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