Shavana's Cat Poem

Hello this is my poem about a fat cat I hope you like it

On the carpet there was a cat
You have to look twice
For a big fat cat
Might be sleeping somewhere!
On the top of the mat
Can you find a black nose?
Against the cool bench
Can you see two round eyes?
Whiskers that sharp
oh! my fat cat.

Othaniel's alliteration writing

This is Othaniel's alliteration writing using the first letter of his name.



Olivia the Octopus ate oranges and oysters in the oven.
Olivia lived with the octopus in Otahuhu and put oranges and oysters in the oven.

Robert's Alliteration Writing

Listen to Roberts alliteration writing and find out who was rapping.

Jouan goes up the hill like Jack and Jill

This is what Jouan has written for alliteration. She also drew a picture using kidpix to go with her writing.

Jouan went up the hill like Jack and Jill.
Jouan jokes with Jane while doing jump jam.
Jane jokes with Jouan while the jet lands in Japan.

Jeryco's Alliteration sentences

This is what Jercyo has written for his alliteration and a picture he drew in kidpix.

Jeryco was juggling with James while jumping on a jet.
James was jumping on Jercyo while juggling the jet.

This term Room 10 are going to be learning about poetry and report writing. This is Saddiya's short alliteration poem using the first letter of her name. She has also drawn a picture in kidpix for it as well.

Saadiyah shook her hand at the sky
Sky shook the sand
Saadiya wore her socks in the sand

Do you know what a Simile is?

Julia, Jasmine, Phontayne and Onosai wrote some interesting similes. They used the sentence starters: The rain fell like... and The vegetables slid down my throat like...
Listen carefully and you might like to share with them a different simile.