Billy's Narrative Story

Listen as Billy shares with you his story about a Snowman. Well done Billy!

Harry the Cat by Judah

During term 4 as part of writing, the children wrote narrative stories. Listen as Judah shares with you his story called Harry the Cat.

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Angelo's Narrative

On Saturday morning me and my family went t othe rain forest to see what animals we could find. As we were walkingwe found a herd of ducks in a pond then we feed them some bread so the ducks moved to the side. Then we walked through the pond. My brother said “when are we going to get home?”. “Not long”, replied dad then we saw a pack of wolves. So we feed them 20 pieces of steak. They didn’t finish so we walked around them. Then we saw hedgehogs and we fed them snails off the trees. We saw a big bear. We had no food to feed it so we threw hedgehogs to it. I picked up some meat and threw it at him too. The bear ran away, “lucky” I said.

By Angelo

Here is Angelo's narrative writing about a picture that we were given. This is what he wrote independantly for his test. Well done Angelo!

Rosalina's Narrative

One day Sandy and Michael went to camp in the forest. They packed everything that they needed. They always need a tent, a water bottle and a toilet paper. Just in case they need to go toilet. When it was night time they set out their tent. Sandy went out to get some wood for the fire. She came back to the place. But something was wrong, her brother was missing. “Michael!” she shouted. She looked everywhere even the toilet. She saw his footprints leading to a road. She thought about it. Sandy thought and said in her mind “he’s been kidnapped!” She kept on following the footprints. She stopped and met a man holding balloons she said the strange man “have you seen my brother?”. “No” he said, he said it in a strange voice. Are you sure? cause it sounds like you know him said Sandy. “No, I’m really sure about it” he said. Sandy found her brother Michael, he was at the shop all along. She said did you trick me? No he said.

by Rosalina

Here is Rosalina's writing sample that she wrote about the picture above. Listen and watch as she shares with you her narrative story. Well done Rosalina!

Yvarna's Narrative Story

Here is Yvarna's narrative writing that she has written about a picture. Watch and listen as she shares with you her ideas. Well done Yvarna!

TJ's Playground Narrative

Here is TJ's writing about a picture that we had as a writing example. Watch and listen as he shares with you his story writing. Well done TJ!

Anamei's conclusion to Jack and the Beanstalk

This is Anamei's writing for Jack and the Beanstalk. Can you hear which sentences are her gems? (a sentence that she has used very interesting words)

Saadiya writes the orientation for Jack and the Beanstalk

This is Saadiya's writing for the beginning of Jack and the Beanstalk. Do you know what happens next?

Jouan retells part of Jack and the Beanstalk

We've been writing lots about fairytales. So far, we covered Little Red Riding Hood, Goldilocks and the Three Bears, The Pied Piper, The Gingerbread Man and Jack and the Beanstalk.
This is Jouan's part she has written for Jack and the Beanstalk.

Gloria introduces Jack and the Beanstalk

This is Gloria's introduction that she has written for Jack and the Beanstalk. If you read her writing below you will see she has added a question, a statement and speech marks. Can you find them? If you have a really good idea of what should come next in the story please leave her a comment.

Once upon a time there lived a boy called Jack, he lived with his mother. One day his mother said "Jack, go and sell the cow it will cost 5 pennies". Jack was supposed to sell it in the market but he didn't. Who did Jack give the cow to? by Gloria